Reading 7

 

Reading 7

Feedback

This week I received feedback from two of my classmates about my work and I gave feedback to these classmates on their work also the work being the paragraphs we did last week. 

 

I first sent it off to the girls the first reactions were both the same.” Joe you're rambling” they pointed out the fact that I'm not quick and concise with what I say. I string out my sentence is needlessly. I personally think I do this because I want this sentence to sound good. I don't know why I do this but I do I can't see right out sentence is and run the reader around in circles simply reiterating my point. which is a pointless in a scholarly or academic article. 

 

So I decided you know what don't give me feedback on these wait a day and I'll do a fix for them because they're all suffering from the same problem. it gave what feedback I could to the girls but at this point I felt somewhat the moralized over the fact that my work up until this point wasn't up to par with what I want to achieve. 

 

once I had finished trimming the fat off my paragraphs I sent it back to the girls. they help me shorten it even more but getting rid of words like very and other such examples of words that can be replaced to make it more coherent. 

I really like this week mainly because I got to communicate with other students on the topic as I felt I be quite in the dark with this topic. and it was nice to get other perspectives on my work which is something I don't often tend to do. 


Feedback from Enho and Anna




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